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Hobbiting - created by rturnbow


Hobbiting
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(5 years and 2146 days ago)

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avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Good image, but try to work on some of the edges on the stick & figure. A soft blur brush will fix most of them. And since it's dark, the upper part of the figure could be less saturated...color fades in the dark. GL author.

author says:

Good points, I went back over it and fixed some things. I also, got rid of the pink tint, too problematic. Thanks!

(5 years and 2146 days ago)


avatar spaceranger

Besides what Bob said, if he's a Hobbit shouldn't he have hairy feet?

author says:

Hair added...

(5 years and 2146 days ago)


avatar CMYK46
CMYK46 says:

Edges of hair on feet ain't hairy, and you haven't done anything to refine the edges mentioned above.

author says:

Edges were fixed, I'm happy with the feet.

(5 years and 2145 days ago)


avatar kcinsti
kcinsti says:

The light and shadows in this are kind of all over the place, though I can appreciate the difficulty. I really like the concept, but otherwise I'm not quite sure what to make of it.

Maybe you could've moved the model slightly to the right then made the bottom left mushroom bigger, therefore making it cast more light. I find if I'm having trouble lighting a scene it helps to have a dominant light source to fool the eye.

It also helps to selectively blur/sharpen parts of the image to mimic the way humans perceive things i.e. I know the dude is the focus of the image but while I'm looking at him my brain is still noticing how sharp the background and buildings are and therefore it feels as if something is a bit wrong. Hope that makes sense!

author says:

Appreciate the input but I've spent all the time I will on this one.

(5 years and 2145 days ago)


avatar DanLundberg

Creating an entry is a lot of work so I understand your decision to stop revising. But for the future, I would note that a Rule-of-Thirds (rather than centering) composition can be more dramatic (and might have yielded a compelling diagonal arrangement here if your hobbit were moved to the right and the little mushrooms were in the middle). [BTW the horizon line of the lamp at his feet doesn't seem to match that of the other elements.]

avatar spaceranger

Congrats Randy!!

author says:

Thanks!

avatar George55
George55 says:

Congratulations.....!

author says:

Thanks!

(5 years and 2139 days ago)


avatar TorDoni
TorDoni says:

Congrats!!!

author says:

Thanks!

(5 years and 2139 days ago)


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Staff Of Inspiration - created by Geexman


Staff Of Inspiration
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(5 years and 2941 days ago)

avatar pixelkid
pixelkid says:

A beaut!! Really sweet image.

avatar arca
arca says:

Great creation and well done with the lighting!

avatar George55
George55 says:

very nice idea....gl author.

avatar erathion
erathion says:

Wow...so cool so powerful...well done

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