very cute

ohh she is sooo cute

Very well done and cute, maybe the bottke is a little bit too blurry... Good luck author !

Very well done and cute, maybe the bottke is a little bit too blurry... Good luck author !

thanks a lot for the comments!

good work author...

Quite amusing accentuated by the guy asleep in the background.

LOL, great image...or so :P

Lol Funny!..

High Humor

Good find on the teeth, lots of blurry edges.

Thanks cmyk, I was trying a new effect, still trying to decide if I like it or not.

YEEEK! (as the contest demands LOL)

Hilarious, author!!!!!! I think 'going commando' IS 'going rogue', right? LOL, scary thought. Love her eyes.

Thanks you guys. Pearlie make sure you check out her latest novel, ok.

I can see Russia from my House

What a maverick!

Tsk tsk, shame on you. you got part right though.

Too dark, color should extend above eyelid.

It was meant to be that dark,"gothic style"..
im gonna try to fix the color part.

The flesh of the eyeball itself looks black...Interesting concept, but the execution looks rushed, without attention to detail with the color just slapped on.

I dont think this was rushed?..thats a bit diferent,..I can call it simple edit, playing with effects..
about the slapped color..there's not a lot of room to play and extend the color..
I tried what I saw was right for my eyes..if mess with color too much,
then it would look like a clown..maybe u are right in the eyeball part..
Thanks for commenting!!.

I love it! ♥, I think I will go with this make up from now on

JoeCacia lol,I think u will look pretty on pink..

Thank you so much author!

I love it! I think the color is great!

I would shade a little more the pupil to give the imagine a bigger dynamic. Very nice idea.

Thanks for all comments!
and thank u Akassa im gonna work on all suggestions.

Fixed the color above eyelid,some dodge tool to give brightness to the eye,.. and shaded a tiny bit the pupil..thanks all for the suggestions.

innovative...

Too blurry..But good peace of thinking.