good mehendi design but you need to upload ur own image(the image of the hands) uncut on ur sbs !! well i like it but it will be more better if you can make the colors only on the mehendi design not on the skin okey G- luck author

It will also look better if the colors blend better and don't look so "stripey."
Great concept, though!

Remove the color overlay from the skin and this will be better.

Try bending the colors with the curves of the arms, the are overlayed now and do not really look convincing to me

This is great...but I think I would have almost liked this more if the edges of color weren't so obvious. A bit softer transition from one color to the next. I realize it's past the editing period, author...so let me just say..."nicely done"!

Beautiful...

I can't make out what is flying. It looks like either just a bird wing, or a dead bird. Now that I studied your SBS, I can barely make out the woman, but the wings are too large and overdominate the woman, making the image very hard to "read" without seeing the SBS...
Perhaps you could give her face and hair a bit more contrast.

Even if i don`t understand what`s happen in this pics it looks beautifull.....

EDIT DONE ... changed so much that the SBS is not very applicable to this image. Sorry about that, I did not have time to change it. It still shows that I did the work and gives details of my first image.

Author I have to be honest that it took me 5 minutes too to actually see what was flying there (and I watched the SBS a couple of times and wondered how you used the sources). Somehow you have a kind of visual illusion here, either you see it or you don't

Nevertheless I really like this entry, visually it is good, has some mystery in it and makes you want to look again. The motion could be a bit better, looks like she's photographed with a stroboscoop now, if there would be anything you want to improve I'd say have a look at that again

Okay ... tried some changes. I think it is better but I believe Rob is right. When you look at something a long time you have a vision of what it looks like but it only you can see it. Sometimes it is not a good vision LOL!

Please let me know if you think it is better???

think it is more recognisable now what is flying there

Hey Rob! Thanks! Just one question, is the motion blur better? I worked on that too!

To be honest If I were you I'd keep the original entry for my personal portfolio (I liked it better) but also think you made the right choice to change it for this contest. Think you have to search for a photo which has got motion blur on it and see how that looks like on a photo, it will give more a blur trail.

Much better! You can clearly make out the woman, and the motion looks more "moving," to fit the statement.
Great improvement!

I could be a "stop-motion" image, or a "slow-motion". Very beautiful, and it makes our imagination fly away...

oh, very nice one...

Fantastic entry author...i did not saw the previous version/versions but this one is powerful...well done

Thanks Nator. I was unsure about the changes so it is really great to get positive feedback now that they are done.

i should have seen this earlier..., beautiful job

The right to life overrides the right of all.
Thank you BP

Very imaginative. I love this one. GL

Great job, it's a difficult source to work with, but you created an excellent image. Well done

Nice entry . . . . Beautiful image . . . .

very nice work author...totally different approach...best of luck

Very cute and pure!

Nice work

Really sweet image

Creative & imaginative also......Best of Luck.

i like the characters of the text, but u made it look weird by not keeping same distance between all letters... this fact is one of the professional designers's basic principes of work... either u feel it or u learn it in time ...and the bigg letter from the beggining of each word makes it looks less valuable as well... in my personal opinion... GOOD LUCK

I think you should either take the lettering out completely or move it elsewhere, not on top of the corn.

all the best ........

This is an cool idea, the colours are great.
The letters are very nicely colored as well. Have you made them yourself or know where they come from? GL

nice & simple!

Agrees about the text. Just remove it. It's obviously colored corn.

very colorful....good concept GL

good luck