I'm thinking the title is suppose to be MONSTER kiss.. would make more sense.. good luck author... nice sketching and shading work

The lips impression is in the air. idea is not clear

wow

Pretty blurry...

Good work on the guys, I agree though, they are not focused enough.

It's a nice image but i really don't get it xD

agree that its kind of blurry

The slugs or what ever it is, is a little too blurry and the kiss in the middle of the screen might be too flat & Sharp. Good luck author.

good work, except the kiss

I kinda like it. And if the kiss is on a window or something, you should make that more obvious for the viewer.