A bit too dark on the edges, you can't see her awesome shoes! Reply »

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Hahaha... Ok Mossy, I'll be fixed in a few minutes... Thanks! Reply »

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I hope to give a better view ... the shoes! Reply »

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This has a surreal and a beautiful look to it. Nice work, author! Reply »

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I like the image but i dont think you should have put the hair so straight upwards from the back of her head. I keept looking at what was wong with the girl why she looked so odd, then i saw it.. its the hair it gives the neck a real weird angle for some reason while you didnt really changed that at all. I love the mood u added to the picture and the color changes. The motion you ahve added fits perfectly too! I would have added the watch a lil more to the middle closer to her hands though. but overall its very nice, high score! Reply »

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Thank you Danielle, for your constructive criticism.
As soon as I can will do something about the hair. I really do not "feel" the fault, so it was so.
But I agree with you!
Thank you!!! Reply »

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I made some modifications:

The clock approached her hands.
I have no experience with hair...
So... Duplicated twice the model's hair and worked the size and the edges with smudge.

Tks. Reply »

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looks better to me now author Reply »

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Oh, she'd better land on something soft! Hehehe brilliant idea Reply »

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Thank you again, Danielle!

Thanks Jim, I'm glad you enjoyed! Reply »

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