The "Sand in a bottle" label is blurry and hard to read. I wouldn't use a drop shadow with text. Reply »

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I like the "give yourself a beach tan" text, but the "sand in a bottle text" is kind of hard to read. What you might try is using the same technique you used for the "give yourself..." text on the "sand..." text, only make the text dark and the shadow light, know what I mean? Maybe you'll like that better. Reply »

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thank you for the comment and advice
I'll see what I can do tomorrow Reply »

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realistic work author.. Reply »

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thank you Kushpatel
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@ Mossy B and IDt8r I made some changes to the text "sand in a bottle"
I also added an sbs Reply »

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I like the change. It looks very classy. Reply »

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Much easier to read, good improvement! Reply »

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More contrast would be punchier. And shouldn't it be "TAN in a Bottle"? For me, the sand is an irritant, not an objective, when I go to the beach; the last thing I want to do is spray sand on myself. (Or is this somehow an exfoliant?) Reply »

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@ DanLundberg - It was ment humoristic - with the picture of the woman all covered with sand Reply »

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I will have one for me here! lol Reply »

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