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Like the concept. Foreground glass is a great idea to add depth. The filter end of a cigarette in an ash tray just peeking into the lower right corner of the scene might help better explain the cool smokey atmosphere. Her lighting is off, however. She seems to be slightly forward of the ceiling down lights, yet her front (including shins) are illuminated. I would: Get rid of the down-light ray cones and let those lights just be the wall washers on the brick wall that they are. Unflip the singer and add a spotlight on her coming in from the upper left corner, creating a stronger circle of light with her shadow in the middle on the brick wall behind her. Reply »

Some changes made...thanks Dan Reply »

I think this works much better. I would note that while we might be able to see the spotlight's housing from our vantage point, we should not see the bright bulb itself because it's primarily pointed away from us towards her. Reply »

I suppose she's singing a blues... or a sad song... Reply »

nice done Reply »

nice work... Reply »

very nice work author Reply »

great entry! gl Reply »

nice, good luck Reply »