Looks like she's standing in front of the light, not in it... Reply »

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Nice composition I like the wings and the flowers she's holding in her hand. But maybe you could work a bit on the skirt. It looks very square. Maybe a bit liquify and dodge and burn can help to make it look like her butt is actually under that skirt Good luck! Reply »

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I agree with cmyk, try lightening up her right side, while removing all the light streaks that any part of her touches from the left. I also suggest a gradient mask on the light itself, for added realism as the light dissipates. Also try what Lelaina suggested. Good luck Reply »

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oh author.. go a head and show the BUM... you put a lot of work into this, and it's not pornographic... and she has a great tush!! (red flag this and ask if it's okay to show her behind.. it would make this piece really pop!!! great job Reply »

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good change, much more dramatic.. (i agree with GolemAura! xD) Reply »

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nce idea Reply »

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Pretty good! But the wings look like they're floating behind the lady. Try blending the ends of them instead of just burning that part of the body. Good Luck Reply »

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