Very cute, author, love the head especially.

For such a strong light source at the back, she is very bright at the front. I'm struggling to see where the source was used, maybe a SBS would help. And the floating balls/lens flare doesn't really do it for me. Wait until CMYK sees it

Looks better with the adjustments that you made. I presume the source is the plate on the ground?

HA i see it, tho it is easily overlooked. also not much use of the source, tho thats my personal opinion. gl author

A little bit of dodge on the leaves edge would have made it a little bit better, maybe some on the front upper edge of the glass. Moreover the leaves are the same color and brightness of the trees on the background.