There are some very good parts, but the overall image looks quite messy and it's difficult to grasp the concept. I would lose the ground from the 'roof' part and leave only the clouds hanging there. Could also help, if you would blend only a finger or two of the hand into the 'screen' .. Cover the black background with something and fix the blurriness of the table and screen from the left side - and the perspective for the table - and this will be a good one.

ok widiar i have make the changes that you adviced me to .thanks for taking the time to give advice and not to criticies like many are doing here instead of helping and learn from eachother .thank you

Whoa, that was quick. There are still some minor tweaks, but let's wait what others have to say. Looking a lot better into my eyes already, now it's easier to grasp the idea of your box and screen. I like how people are innovative and try new ways of creating OOB images, this is one of the good tries. Remember we only give suggestions according to our taste, thou sometimes there are some 'laws' like with lightning and shadows. I always appreciate when ppl try and improve the pictures. You can always say 'I tried, but it didn't work or made it worse' for my comments, I'm sure some of my/our ideas sucks totally when we see the end results

I know you made a kind of popup image from the monitor screen. But IMO I think the flat image would be better, now it's a bit confusing to me. The effect of the hand get inside the screen is very good, but as Widiar said, the top is noticeable only in hi res. Of course, it's your entry, and doing (or not) the corrections is up to you. GL!

I really like the idea here, but I didn't really understand what was happening until I went to full view. I think its because you used different angles from the same shot. What I'm trying to say is it might look better if you didn't do different picture angles and instead used the normal shot and tried to make a glass box instead. I can visualize it in my head and would love to try it, but it was your idea and I wish you luck with it.

ok im gonna try to fix it i do not understand the glass box butt ima try som thanks

wow, this entry is getting ripped to shreds by comments...gosh, give the author a break...very interesting idea author

Just trying to help.. for me this is one of the best ideas so far on this contest. It's a sign of a good entry usually, if people comment it a lot and give ideas to make it even better.

thanks widiar thanks to every body for taken the time i hope its better like this

not bad

Good effort and it works as a OOB image. But it dose require a fair amount of work still mostly on the edges they are very ragged and need to be smoothed out......

intersting, bt u might just want to get rid of the jaggy edges good luck!

Some images are quite blurry (waterfall, birds, pool). And there's a white line around the airplane.

Good try but the image is just too busy for me

that is good one ,good luck

freaky

It's a beautiful image, but not so OOB to me.

you made this huge image and then just added the door to it.... doesn't look like an oob image at all sorry author.

I agree with keley22 and erikuri... it's not an oob

Point taken guys. Out with the door in with the rampaging elephants

very nice ! good luck

I would've likee to see the white level on the paper a bit higher and maybe a photo filter to pull it all together. Good luck!

IMHO this is not OOB image,this is hand that write through empty frames...any how,good luck author

the perspective of the frame that is nearest is wrong but other than that, cool image!

Pen point is in sharp focus, so the writing under it would be too...

Erathion is right; you need at least masking between frames and behind the small one to make the image look like OOB. Flip the big frame horizontally too, as Tucker said. A different color of background inside the frames will make the difference! GL!...

Thanks for all the feedback, CMYK46, I can't really do anything about the writing - it's as it was, so perhaps I should blur the nib of the pen a little? erikuri, will try your suggestion and see what it looks like - thanks!

try adding a white background tp the frame on right side, n as far as the pen is considered try blurring the tip of the pen , its a good entry, gud luck author!

Blurred as suggested by lots of folks! Thanks

mazing sweetheART ;} happy hippy hugglez

nice 1, gud luck author!

^^ u shuldn't mention the name, :O

ok ! good luck author

source number 5 doesnt work for me cool imege gl

nice one

very cool work...I like mirror effect very much...best of luck

ei tia.. gostei... mas achei q faltaram algumas sombras em seu trabalho !!!

Sombras em quarto com alguma penumbra?