Cigarrete is too bright.

nice but i agree with erikuri - the cigarette is too bright compared to the background

Honestly I can't even tell as far as the cigarette is concerned.

The blood looks quite unnrealistic and it looks like the woman is eating the stake...also, I'd agree to try what Nator suggests.

nice idea but i think the man should be vertically placed

it does look like the stake is being eaten.

Have done, thank you for your advice

Maybe delete the hair from the mask. It makes it look quite unnrealistic. Not bad otherwise. Also, if possible, it would make it more realistic if you were to either make the glasses run to his ears or delete them completely.

I agree with gamemastertips, I think it would look much better without the hair. Nice work

Ok I did a copy without hair and glasses and have decided that he just looses too much "atmosphere" when I do that, so have decided to stick with this... and it is a mask, so reality is not actually a prerequisite. Thank you for your input and advice.

nice idea

Nice work...gl

this is nice but i think the soul should be smaller and it should seem to be coming out from the tomb

creepy

Kind of muddled...good idea but hard to see what's going on. I can just barely make out the graveyard.

nice work...reminds me of a guy from teenage muntant ninja turtles maybe if you play around and blend the mask with the image then this will be real awesome!

Yes, I agree with the blending, I saw that but just at first when it was up here. Will work on that.

Perspective of the mask is wrong...try to fit mask more on face,and u have some rough edges...try to fix that,and this could be very nice work.Maybe to add some texture on the mask...just an idea...good luck

I actually like this idea. IMO I think you should replace your mask with a skull, but keep the shape of what you have. If you know what i mean.

I agree with everyone here. Nice idea, just fix the execution a little.

Fix the edges & shade the mask more. Waiting for SBS.

Former comment was made by me, just forgot to login.

So now I fixed it a little, and also added a SBS. It was tricky to get the shadows right, I´m not sure it´s much better, but some I hope.

I looked at your sbs... I think you could have done this a lot differently if you used the pen tool. Also, i think you uploaded the wrong replacement. I see what you want in the sbs, but its not the same as this one here.

Step 5 is before I changed the opacity and made final finish. I didn´t think it was any use to put up the final result as it is already here. Pen tool? Yeah, probably, but I am still on the "bad" computer and small small details are really awful to do on this one, the computer is like a half second behind.

mask is too bright but its nice though