I like the idea, but I think it would be more effective (and on theme) if you placed the focus on the screen door and had the objects inside as OOF. Just my opinion though.

Thanks RayTedwell for suggestion. I took this last year of my wife when on vacation so could not re-shoot (we live in a big city and not many people have screen doors!). I did, however, like your advice so I resubmitted this version which is more cropped to emphasize the screen holes as much as I could.

I didnt see the original, but i like this. Well done with the cropping, i think it works.

I didn't see the original, but judging by what has been said, this would be better.....it is a good crop, and right on theme..good luck

Nice shot GL

yeah I like this version, makes the screen much more visible. Glad you had an extra few shots to choose from!

amazing capture. love this one! GL to you!