(5 years and 2230 days ago)
karaflazz says:
Nice story telling photo with some room for improvement tho.
The b/g (background) should be a better choice (something that looks like a road or an alley since they are the "mafia"
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Lighting should be more "mysterious" IMHO & a wider frame so the sharpener on the top is included.
With a little more attention to some small details next time you will surely do better.
All the best author!!!
author says:
Thank you very much for your honest & useful comment.
I had actually thought about the use of a road as well and a more Sin City-like look, but this is all I was able to end up with at the late hour I took the shot. ^^
This being my first entry I sure hope there will be a lot more and improved pictures.
Better be careful or P.E.T.A. will get after you (Pencils Escaping Terrible Actions) 
Howdie stranger!
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