It seems warped and off kilter. The fact that it is at an angle, rather than perpendicular, does not enhance the image, but contributes to the odd look of it.

The focus seems to be on the very top letters in the 'arch' of the window

Love the sky reflections in the building.

is that a donkey or a pony? its soooo cute!

Might want to add an sbs

done

I'm sorry, but to me they look like what they are.

yeah, I was thinking I missed the theme goal on this one.

My opinion is that here is too much the black, and do not happen anything. You should imagine a scene with these "animals"

NO, I should have just kept more to the goal. Friiskiwi was right.