She could be more in the frame... the idea is pretty cool... but the missing foot and the cut out hair kind of compromise the image!

have to agree with mperri, but great try.

The problem with that shot was that, in order to catch the movement of the hair, I spontaneously turned the camera a bit, so it's kind of "leaning"... So I had to decide whether to correct the axis and cut out some details, or keep the details of the hair and leave the picture "leaning"... After having read the comments, I realized that keeping the hair and the part of the foot in, is probably more important. Hope it is better now! Thanks for the comments anyway!!! I appreciate them!

Much better now... still, there is one foot cropped off... As I said, I love the idea of the shot, but I am a little ticked off by accidental crops...
BTW, I actually like the angulation...

agree...the angle (or lean) is fine, it actually works in favor of the composition here, it's the cropping problem...in the future just be certain to double check the image in the view finder especially at the edges for accidental cropping...otherwise a great idea

great capture

Interesting shot but feels more like a caught off guard photo rather than a posed shot. Good luck to you though.

well done !

Well executed shot.