
I took this picture just, using a flash gun in slave mode and my onboard flash. I converted to sepia in photoshop and adjusted the contrast slightly.
Hope you like it! (5 years and 3720 days ago)
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The paper on the left corner of the frame is BOH (blow out highlights,its when the light is so strong that you loose detail).You should diffuse it with a piece of paper or a sheet or something!
I like the mood but i believe that you can do better!!!
You should all so include the whole spiral of the book or nothing at all!
Just some suggestions (imho).
Thank you very much Karaflazz. I actually blew out the top left corner on purpose to add effect to the image, and the bindings were meant to add a compositional value in that empty space up the top, with no points of interest. I do understand your comments of course and thanks for taking the time to write these tips for me.
I did my best!
and, imo, choose your dof (depth of field) a little more carefully, it is a little oof (out of focus) around the pen itself.
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