you background lacks depth and your shadows need work and you didn't use enough lens flare and there's a bit of a masking problem and cheeseburgers taste best with tartar sauce... (sorry, could resist... I really love this drawing.. wonder ful

i agree with GolemAura, only i would've phrased it in a slightly more sophisticated way... HIGH MARKS FROM ME!!

I think its u author
edit: yeah and its u very happy drawing

neat job..great idea...

I love the colours you used!

nice sketch if hair was complete it would be great

very well done... but boy you'd get a right smack bottom for putting your practice eyes ON TOP of the image..hehehe.. high marks!!!! great description

True to form! This is exactly what I thought of when I read the guidelines!

I'm worse at hair than at noses Nishagandhi lol....they are illogical to me :P. I thought digital hair should be well...easier. Obviously they are not...lol..I tried to follow this tutorial http://features.cgsociety.org/story_custom.php?story_id=3174&page=1 but I don't seem to be able to achieve the result lol...)

@GolemAura: I'd thought I could crop out the practice eyes ( if I wanted to) afterwards. But I'd drew the eyes first than realized the egg head need to grow if I didn't want the face to look really weird....lol....

This reminds me of my mother's drawings. She had a similar style. High points for reminding me of my mom.

Great job

If you were only ten years old when you drew this.. I'd have staplegunned you to the bed... and made a billion bucks selling your work LOL

Beautifully simple...

very cool

i meand that the drawing is 10 Years old ...let me thing, ... so i must been 18 as i made it.

edit: j morphed to a y

now it's a favorite.. LOL.. ten YEARS.. not Jears.. jeers is a totally different meaning LOL..

ha ha ha, i made that mistake often. (maby i have learned now) -> i changed the typing

amazzing pic.2 faces in single image

only 2 ?

OMG..it's an optical illusion... you have to search for all the images... dammit author.. you should have told us that earlier... now I can't change my vote to perfection.. thank god I gave you a great vote to begin with... (now I'm going to stare at this all day)

actually i wanted to see if someone spot it without telling. Im not that fokused in getting high votes but thanks alot for it
edit: i´v edited the description a bit

And I found all three without any help! *lie a little* I'm a genius Very good work! And a lot of fun to find all three faces! Good luck

The first time I saw this entry I saw that you said 3 faces, but couldn't find the third. I see it now! Yeah me!

Pure Genius...

1st is on the left side, 2nd is on lower right side, 3rd was just the shape of the face and have no eyes at the right lines, great work author

great job 2nd attempt!!! great work

hey he is really looking imensely happy.good job author

doesnt really look like ur second attempt at portrait... this one is awesome.. and this guy is really happy.. very happy... i like his innocence.. feels like a good friend.

Thanks for all the nice comments. Yes,fasnaushad, he is a good friend...and there is an innocence about him. It's so awesome that you could see that in this portrait.

Hehe, good one!

Sketch is very nice and you caught the mood quite well.. good LUCK

Good idea, and some interesting techniques!

This is very good. Nice job!

very nice explanation behind the image.. I have been to a few hindoestan wedding and its awesome the whole atmosphere during the festivities, the moment the groom arives and the moment that the emotions come free when they are married thnx for sharing

You have truly captured the emotion that I felt for the bride when I read the passage. Very good job.

very nice!!

nice work but u need to show a bit "Shyness" in her....newly wed brides usually never smile and point there eyes down, but good work though