I'm trying out a lot of new ideas here. My first space scene, my first go at creating a space craft from scratch, and first go at trying to work with 2 separate light sources. As always, all comments welcome. (5 years and 3333 days ago)
SilverSurfer says:
I like this one! A couple of goofy things though from what I'm seeing: the sunlight would stop seeping into the room at the top of where the ceiling meets the farthest wall. Presently it is above that line a little bit? Also, it may be correct, but the top of the dark door on the right looks tilted and doesn't seem to match the ceiling line above it. Still, great job on this!
The things at the ends of the wings are at a funny angle...maybe make them round insteas of rectangular, and parts of the wings look transparent...over all, nice job.
Yes, I agree with CMYK... In the way it is, space craft aerodynamics will be harmed...
Thanks for the comments. Blurred edges were actually radial blur on a separate layer to suggest movement, but you're quite right, they just look a bit messy, so I have removed. I have tidied up the shapes on the ends of the wings, but may completely redo them as they still do not look perfect.
nice work...u did good job with a sky and aircraft...but ground don't fit 100%,try to use some overlay and color layers...good luck
I think this is really great
nice work!
Just a couple of minor adjustments for anyone who hasn't yet voted. Shapes on wingtips changed, as suggested by CMYK and minor adjustments to horizon/space blend.
Nice idea!! ; )
Definitely high vote fom me after changes...great imagination and execution. Good luck!
Great!
Congrats for 2nd
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Congrats on 2nd!
Congrats!
Thanks to all who commented & voted!!
Congrats for your second place, Fezjez!
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