(5 years and 2124 days ago)
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JamesD says:
It a good attempt, you may want to pay attention to:
a) The area where the water from the frame meets the ground, the darkest area of water in the far center of your image could be taken out, leaving the main body of water. At the moment it's spoiling the effect IMO
b) The water spilling out of the frame might look better coming from the bottom of the frame...
(c) The side frames could use a little depth
(d) As the animals are coming into the room, their 'colour' would become darker (as it's a room)
(e) Some general elementals ie spray... dark wall patches from the water (maybe that's a little too nitpicky) so just water elementals :P
On a side note: if you could find a higher res pic of the dolphins it would really lift this piece!
Goodluck
author says:
thanks a lot JamesD...I made a little changes on my entry with your valuable guidance. i think it is better than before.
lol love the puppy! IMO think it could have been cropped a little tighter.
Thank you oziipop
Congrats again!
thanks again
and again shabeebsabu congrats
well done
and again thank you madamemonty
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Thanks spaceranger
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